有魅力的女孩 The Attractive Girl

The standard of beauty in China is believed to be the person who has the white skin and big eyes, because people are affected by the commercial ads. So many girls dress well and buy a lot of cosmetics to make them look beautiful and attractive. I have seen so many beautiful girls but only the one who is funny that can attract my attention. 
在中国美的标准被认为是那些拥有白皮肤、大眼睛的人，因为大家都受到商业广告的影响。所以女孩子们都穿得很漂亮，买很多化妆品让自己看起来很漂亮，有吸引力。我见过很多漂亮的女孩，但是只有那些有趣的女孩才能够吸引我的注意。

The charm of a person is not from appearance, but from inside. I met a person when I joined my friend’s party. The girl was playing cards, while other girls played tricks and made the boys feel embarrassed. Then the girl laughed and put her cards on the table and asked to play other games as it was so boring. What she did made the boys set free from the awkward situation. I admired her so much and made friends with her. Later I found that her life was so excellent. Though she did not make up often, she dressed neatly, and her room was tidy. When I asked her question about the brands, she could offer me some advice.  Bur she never showed off it. 
一个人的魅力不是来自外表，而是来自内在美。在我参加一个朋友的聚会时，我遇到过一个女孩。那个女孩当时在打牌，其他女孩则在捉弄人，旁边的男孩们感到很尴尬。女孩笑了笑，把她的牌放到了桌上，说玩其他的游戏，因为这个游戏太无聊了。她的所作所为让男孩们从尴尬的局面中解脱出来。我很钦佩她，所以和她交了朋友。后来我发现，她是非常优秀的，虽然她不常化妆，但是她衣着整齐，房间也很整洁。当我向她资询牌子问题的时候，她也会给我一些建议。但是她从不炫耀。

The girl was full of charm to me, and I learned a lot from her. 
这个女孩对我来说是充满魅力的，我从她身上学到了很多东西。